poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on American Eden by Don-Quixote.

SupremeDreamer4 Aug 2003

the poet stanza, i agree it doesnt fit, but the ghost stanza.. cmon, thats a fucking masterpiece, and works beatifully in it.
And about potentially fucking it up, i dont fuck things up, trial and error just makes me succeed, its just a matter of time, and i dont take long to jump to the next level..

now, really, i want to know why you think the ghost stanza doesnt work.. id love to hear this, because we are basically energy, everything is a form of energy.. and we are children, some of us teenagers, and very few are old wise teachers.

And looking at history, 90% of humanity is still in kindergarten.. a long torturouse path of evolution that makes me think most of us are autistic or simply crazed retards.

do you disagree?