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Bearings (Free verse) by emilyowey

Send me a breath to stand on. Give me a healing nod. Hand me anything to grasp to see, Anything that’s real. I’m standing in this minute, Spinning up and down. Show me my direction, I know not where to go. I know not where I’m looking, I know not what I am. Please send me a vapor, a mist, a breeze So I can know who I am.

horus8 3-Aug-03/1:56 PM
What the hell is that going to do? What are you going to take the vapor and make a fucking sandwich? Good grief.




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