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http://mulberryfairy1 Aug 2003

Thanks for the feedback, I'll have to change that around to clarify. The cat wasn't supposed to be the catalyst of the dismount, instead, the lovers came, and then as the narrator dismounted, the cat's sleeping place was disturbed (but I wanted to end with the dismount, not the cat).