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I, criminal (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

I love Gasoline on my hands Tire smoke Disney Today is valentines She will come home from work follow a trail of rose petals to a bubble bath floral candles I will read romantic poetry we will sip wine, and eat fruit later, she will tell me what she wants and I will comply and then she will cry

god'swife 31-Jul-03/12:35 PM
I for one, believe this is perfect, especially the title. It's Valentine's not Valentines. 10's for you.




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