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I, criminal (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

I love Gasoline on my hands Tire smoke Disney Today is valentines She will come home from work follow a trail of rose petals to a bubble bath floral candles I will read romantic poetry we will sip wine, and eat fruit later, she will tell me what she wants and I will comply and then she will cry

<~> 31-Jul-03/11:55 AM
i'm not getting it. i came back many timnes. it works, but it is far-too open-ended for me. call me simple. i like things spelled out more.




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