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My Last Plea (Ode) by Inconceivable_Dreams

You shake me to my core. And I can't feel anymore. You put me in a trance. I hope I have a chance. I know what's at stake. That's a chance I will take. I don't want to sound fake. This isn't a piece of cake. I just don't know how to say. The way I feel everyday. I come to your door. Hoping we'll become more. I can't hear a word you say. Cause everything fades away. And then I see you smile. I reform from a broken pile. You mend all of my sorrow. Giving me hope for tomorrow. You're my last ray of light. I will not lose this fight. You're all that remains. Without you I'll go insane... I'm out on my last plea. So please do not flee. I'm down on the ground. Hoping to be found. I can't just breathe. You can't just leave. You shake me to my core. And I can't feel anymore. You put me in a trance. I hope I have a chance. I just don't know how to say. The way I feel everyday. And then I see you smile. I reform from a broken pile. You mend all of my sorrow. Giving me hope for tomorrow. You're my last ray of light. I will not lose this fight. You're all that remains. Without you I'll go insane... I'm out on my last plea. So please do not flee. I'm all alone. I want to change your tone. I hear you on the phone. Regretting what I've shown. Your voice is all I hear. Now there's nothing to fear.

SupremeDreamer 31-Jul-03/1:06 AM
the repetition.. is a bit redundant. 6




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