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ReplyTo a comment on Seeing Clearly in the Dark by Jimbo.

INTRANSIT30 Jul 2003

The bad news: S-3 I don't like. S-1 curdling sky/clear sky. keep the curdling. overall, a bit too much. overdone.

The good news: You are tucked under a swans wing. paddle gently. listen to her rhythm. she will share her feathers. best of luck.