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Infection
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Free verse
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nocturnalism
Once upone a poon The yeasty beastys grewn Baking bread was her delight While customers came for fresh loaves in the night No shower Leaves a taste of Sweet anâ sour A douche all problems fixed Until the next ride infectionix
SupremeDreamer
29-Jul-03/1:54 AM
cmon..i got the idea but you could of had more imagination with the presentation, it left me with a sensation of emptiness..5.
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