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To Lesley (Free verse) by Bahookie

I truly love another Myself is put aside Your self soft skin burning A heart in my hand

LuckyJoe 26-Jul-03/5:28 PM
Holding a persons heart in your hand, caring only about them? Don't care about yourself because your obsession lies within and upon them? The feel of their skin makes your hands burn sensually?

Short and sweet... nothing wrong with that. Thought I'd let you know what I got from your poem... see if I was right in how I read into it. If not I'd like to know what it was that you were thinking with your words.




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