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ReplyTo a comment on 8:45 AM Dentist Appointment by http://mulberryfairy.

walrus825 Jul 2003

I think you should replace the word "mouth" at the end of the third line with the word "anus":

Each time she placed
rubber gloved hands
inside my anus
I gagged,
my teeth’s chattering barely controlled
by the light pressure of her hand.