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ReplyTo a comment on Upon a falling star (new/changed) by LuckyJoe.

Caducus24 Jul 2003

I'm not sure this has an identity of a poem or a lyric. As a poem its exhausting and as a lyric the singer would need to be rescued by full stops. Its not awful but not good neither just a mass of phrases the amount to little. 5