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education (Free verse) by richa

she had set out to the highlands, a sun hour north pitching her shack with a honed precision taut as her purpose, to pick from the skins of bark and weasel her supper and learn a little about the cold and a hunger, well she learnt all the relevant dates have since been filled in

Mr Pig 22-Jul-03/11:18 AM
Wonderfully versed and the 3rd line is sheer perfection.




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