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Joe is Dead Now (Free verse) by Freethinker1602

That smile meant so much to me The way you smiled comforted me My hand seemed to fit so perfectly in yours Now the only thing I'll see of you Is a tiny picture I'll keep close Close to my heart I won't believe that you are gone It's too much to accept Because we'd planned forever You knew who I was I loved you and now I can't say it I love you and now that I know what tomorrow brings I'll remember you Forever and think about Who you were every day Stay close to me Joe And I'll never forget you jmv

thepinkbunnyofdoom 20-Jul-03/12:45 AM
Okay I was refering to the poem, not to me. Make it apparent in your writing not in commentary. Side comments mean nothing as a poet, its the body of the poem that matters.




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