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Suffocating (Free verse) by mytenderrage

Everything Is just crashing down. Pushing. Harder. Pressuring. I feel the weight. I feel the pain. I can???t breathe. I can???t hold on. I can???t. It???s just pushing me harder. Crashing against me. My pain and torment. My aching form Forlorn and lost Lying under The large solid. It???s crushing me It???s pushing against me Hard. I cannot breathe. I cannot move. I cannot do anything. I am suffocating. I just lie there helplessly As I am crushed. By my own misery.

ARTIE 22-Jul-02/3:10 PM
There is help available. Vallium, Darvocet, any narcotic will suffice. Take two, breathe deeply, and call me in the morning. The doctor is "In".




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