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Paean (Other) by Terence

I was restless, unhappy and bored. Then my spirit soared for a girl. Now in boundless amazement I praise the dear Lord, For the world is my oyster when she is my pearl.

Terence 17-Jul-03/8:43 AM
Good point. I have corrected the poem accordingly by changing "you are" to "she is".




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