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Suffocating (Free verse) by mytenderrage

Everything Is just crashing down. Pushing. Harder. Pressuring. I feel the weight. I feel the pain. I can???t breathe. I can???t hold on. I can???t. It???s just pushing me harder. Crashing against me. My pain and torment. My aching form Forlorn and lost Lying under The large solid. It???s crushing me It???s pushing against me Hard. I cannot breathe. I cannot move. I cannot do anything. I am suffocating. I just lie there helplessly As I am crushed. By my own misery.

kawakurdi 22-Jul-02/1:46 PM
I read all your poems. Genuine feelings expressed clearly and simply. Why all this pessimism, desperation and pain and you are only 18? Look at the brighter side of life and its beautiful possibilities.




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