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Scarecrow (Lyric) by horus8

<Verse I> There's a murder of crows off to heaven A coal black swirl to the sky I couldn't help but see you there Cussing out god without a care Does he know you now, like I tried? {Chorus} So cry me a river, my baby Make it long, deep & wide 'till off blue Because, this is going to be the last time You steal my verse, and kill its rhyme The way you love me, takes some getting use too. [Bridge] As the closer I get becomes too far I lower my guard, you raise the bar The more you're filled, is the more I'm removed. {Repeat the chorus from above once} <Verse II> There's no room for me, in your heaven Just a long hallway with "wet floor" sign The mood is low, the rent's too high Why call it death if no one dies? Aint it funny, how a man will walk that line. {Chorus once} [Bridge once] {Chorus again & fade}

horus8 15-Jul-03/4:52 PM
It's by far my best song to date, very old Johnny Cash in the likes of walking the line and ring of fire, I'll make the mp3 soon, but mark my words, this will be my first hit as stands. I catered it specificaly to industry standards of shit title, placebo verse, and pop crotch chorus. It can't fail.

On a brighter note, at least I'm out of by far the nasty jail I've ever seen.

On one of the walls some grafiti read (in spanish)

"Justice can be purchased at the front desk for 200.00$"

Indeed.

I'm sure you could imagine my cackle it took my eyes 15 minutes to adjust to the pitch black to even begin to make out the various scrawlings on the wall, and the even carried out the town drunk to allow me a moment of perfect blessful solitude before taking a piss in the tray that appears to be what breakfast comes in upon. Cement floor, no lights, no running water, and a very fast rat I nicknamed Stephanie.




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