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Aluminum Xena - Prima Ballerina (Free verse) by SupremeDreamer

-- twisted metal of aluminum cans forming the petals the skirt belonging to a scrap yard ballerina named xena my dream dancer resounding foot steps echos the sick cancer rust stains spread our xena missteps skirt silk razors sent sailing into the air naive pixies beware

Rodavlas 15-Jul-03/7:31 AM
for some reason I feel like it needs some tweaking. But, I like the visuals. sharp!




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