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Acoustic (Free verse) by zzinnia66

He tasted like copper his music, like blood. I gave him the spark but uncoiled his wind and left him onstage, blue and blind.

nentwined 14-Jul-03/1:49 PM
blue?

very pretty. but once more I show my ignorance--I don't get it.




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