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Proud to be black (Other) by girl

Swinging my hips as i walk Gesticulating beningly as i talk Why should i regard their didain? or drop to my knees and plea for acceptance. The breeze provoked my afro puffs as i relax on the seashore My smmoth dark skin gleamed and my eyes sparkle as the sun tends to smile more. They screwed up their faces as if they smell a dead rat. However my superb shimmering smile remained.

kipahni 22-Jul-02/12:58 PM
this is a great poem though I feel like it's half done, you should add more.




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