Robert K Foster10 Jul 2003

That's fine. no need to be closed minded about some advice. I am offering you a response, pointing out that perhaps readers will misinterpret your intentions because of a lack of clarity. "bubbling up" is not a clear and concise description. So, asking me to believe what I want to believe is fine, but I beleive that this could be a better peom. Strive to go beyond the mediocre. give up some words.