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My BPD vs Yours (Ode) by OneFingerAnswer

Yeah it sucks Yeah some BPD sufferers commit Tough fucking cookies With a side of dry dog shit Get on with your life BPD isn't for show If you want some one who cares Quit being a fucking ho Ha! "All rights reserved" People don't steal shit, MCR I think you should have the right To a 50 mph intro to a car Write your poems But don't ask us for pity Don't ask us to love you When your poems are so shitty You think you have it bad You think this makes you glow I think your poems are crap I just thought you should know

DreamerSupreme 9-Jul-03/2:50 AM
Heres the basic DMTR That I Came Up With:

OneFingerAnswer Dissected:

One

1: being a single unit or thing <one day at a time>
2a: being one in particular <early one morning>
b: being preeminently what is indicated <one fine person>
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Finger

1: any of the five terminating members of the hand: a digit of the forelimb; especially:
one other than the thumb

2c: a projecting piece (as a pawl for a ratchet) brought into contact with an object to affect
its motion

4: INTEREST, SHEAR -- often used in the phrase have a finger in the pie

5: BIRD 10 -- usually used with the
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Answer

2: a reply to a legal charge or suit: PLEA; also: DEFENSE (these two words dont need dissection)

3: something done in response or reaction

5: one that imitates, matches, or corresponds to another
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Secondary Dissections:

interest

3 : ADVANTAGE, BENEFIT; also : SELF-INTEREST
5 a : a feeling that accompanies or causes special attention to an object or class of
objects: CONCERN (Dissection not required)
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shear

1 : to cut through something with or as if with a sharp instrument
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bird

7 (chiefly British) [a]: a hissing or jeering expressive of disapproval
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Final Dissections:


advantage

1: superiority of position or condition

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self-interest

1: a concern for one's own advantage and well-being


[Benefit i felt wasnt needed in the dissection.]




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