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you will feel (Free verse) by nentwined

you will feel my pain every ounce, every FLUID ounce of every drop of my blood as every razor scar erupts: one giant burst of ecstasy-- I AM HERE! and now I'm gone.

nentwined 7-Jul-03/7:50 AM
Not exactly an analogy; this, now that the category has been created, should more properly be a "pimple poem". It was meant to be a condensed version, saying more the intent of such poems than actually trying to mimic the style. "You hurt me, but I can hurt me more! But I want you to feel my pain! Please? Ha, I'll show you!" :/




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