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Misgivings (Free verse) by Topaz Servias

Through the deception of our lives together We drift apart as we embrace each other To someone watching we seem a couple But to my eyes, the truth is seen. At times we hate each other with a passion But still we know we wold never leave I walk away with words unsaid While the words that were leave a bitter taste. Now I look upon our lives And find that we are worlds apart To stiffle the feeling of sad regret I close one door to open another. With these words I say goodbye Yet in my heart forever you remain Know that while I walk away Around the corner I say your name.

spank me baby yeah 4-Jul-03/7:03 AM
A bit saccharin like, its not poo but a bit like the verses in the 50 cent card shops 4




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