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Caesar and the Giant. (revised) (Free verse) by SupremeDreamer

-- Arrogant young self-proclaimed Caesar suffering delusions of granduer did raise his sword to poke a dwarf. Which is in actuality a giant. -Unfortunately- His hallucenagenic suffering did prevent the ability TO: Realize the creatures size and strength. -Suddenly- The giant stirs in irritation. FROM: A burning sensation originating from his arse. -So- The giant turns To see so-called Caesar. -Conclusion- The giant joyfully steps on him thinking of memories which include cockroaches. Upon the insects tombstone the giant did carefully engrave: ~~~Jeremi RGallet~~~ -Settle- Our esteemed Poem Ranker Wanker

SupremeDreamer 2-Jul-03/12:38 PM
User DurtKL replied to your Poemranker comment on "Let's Start Writing Poetry Again Instead of Disses" in which you said:

> good.

Their reply was:

but ur still a little bitch
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Ok, you want to play games? you want to drive me into the brilliant twisted games i learned very early in my life? whats pathetic is that your also a coward, since you deleted the poem right afterwards.

Im not sure if i should dissect you into pieces and make you into a cannibals barbeque delight or simply let you be and stamp you forever as a coward, a lonely one who has masturbated so much that your prick is now bent, balls empty, fully spent, to be without sperm for the rest of eternity. Your a little bee that can indeed fly with an irritating buzz that tortures my ears, and your tiny stinger, comparative in life your tiny dick, lingers now close to my button of senseless rage, which would drive me to engage the project of crushing your head with blood that will spread from your collapsed skull which will effectively sign you as null, void, and no longer existent in the universe.. ok? you little shit.




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