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Forsaken Faults (Free verse) by DeadtotheWorld

The struggling scientist calculating in his lab Not realizing what a great life he has had Not knowing what to do next The scientist stays up from midnight to eight Not knowing what he just did that’s great He has just cured cancer and he’s not going to stop He has just realized theirs a formula he has to drop To make the solution of world hunger a reality Then the lonely bum on the street wakes up He now know this will never happen, it was just a dream

DeadtotheWorld 30-Jun-03/12:00 PM
yeah ok I know i have to be more creative thanx for the info, good looking out




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