poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Sublime Street Morals by thepinkbunnyofdoom.

thepinkbunnyofdoom28 Jun 2003

This Poem... Is about a girl. But I made it seem like it had a nice dramatic ending, instead of what really happened. (Note all the names have been changed)Tito as you can guess is me. Madoline is my ex-girlfriend whom is to this day putting me thru hell. Slader is a bastard that I thought If I acted like he didn't bother me then she'd let him fade into the background like he was supposed to. Damn me and being so trusting, in that girl. This seriously is the story of my life up until grabbing the gun and blowing my brains out. I did write a note that made her see things better when she was with me, but we aren't getting back together, she isn't dumping "Slader", and yeah as far as she is concerned I might as well have blown my brains out right in front of her.