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only pleasure left (Free verse) by richa

A child does not need to squat on the rug, to look up to you grandma She does not condescend to hear your words, wrongly chosen When you talk, of your 'only pleasure that is left' she does not seek to question, Well take it from someone sat beside you, who can see the 'only' Part of the sentence, and your slouched bones, collapsed as a fire

Mr Pig 26-Jun-03/2:02 PM
Keep it all, its dandy. (and besides your so methodical I bet you its all been sorted prior to it being on here




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