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ReplyTo a comment on The Twenty-Fifth of Whenevber by OneFingerAnswer.

OneFingerAnswer26 Jun 2003

The rhythm works easily for me. I couldn't find the typos. Might be cause I'm tired but a little help would be met with gratitude.

My lover's not coming back. He's gone. Read it again and you might see something different. Focus on the third stanza. It's not a poem about heartbreak.