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the nature of our stillborn (Free verse) by Crakyamuni

I shudder now at the sounds of the possibilities that live to surround and ultimately limit me Temporality versus periphery, or simply just the enemy My intentions were never to love or be clever in the face of such an instance it was love that was happily severed Don't smile and laugh, it's distance I loved you so much I could never, I can never fucking admit this these crimes and stabbings so poingant, we could hold them and call it resistance

SupremeDreamer 23-Jun-03/10:12 AM
simple, to the point.. could use more imagination.. ill save my vote in the hope that this sees an expansion and a rewrite




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