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OM (Free verse) by SupremeDreamer

What is the mask She wears.. oh widow, She walks and talks Mumbling.. But saying Nothing. Fool, consumed Confused, hazed Forever changing Becoming one with All.. Above it, With balance, No emotion, but all Emotion, in balance. Clear is the mask, Transparency for the Ones who see.. Then the mask Is illusion, And they can see What these calm Skies see. - Om.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 23-Jun-03/4:27 AM
oh please, SupremeDreamer. This isn't about who wins and who loses. Nobody has campaigned with greater diligence, or honesty, for more maturity on this site than me. Given that all I'm trying to do is help others be more mature, in the same way that I help myself to be more mature, can't you see that I have already won? You, on the other hand, appear to be indulging in some sort of childish foray into poetry, never pausing to think about the consequences of your actions, all the while mocking respected institutions such as the maturity award, and repeatedly punctuating your puerile outbursts with juvenile utterances like "feces", "fart", "balls" and "shitty brown"




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