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My girl (Sonnet) by simone_girard

Tynesha you are my special girl Your precious and beautiful like a pearl I'm your mummy and I love you true The apple of my eye that is you To feel you growing inside of me Was the best feeling that could ever be You were given my eyes and my nose But not my ears, thank god not those You were blessed with the most beautiful smile And to see it made sleepless nights worthwhile I was so happy to hear you talk I almost cried when I saw you walk Cause your babyhood slips by so fast And pretty soon it will be past But you were born to me because of love And each day I'll thank the lord above.

poemwanker 23-Jun-03/4:15 AM
TENNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is incredible beautiful emotional and I hope you all end up sitting on a parsnip. Preferably the same parsnip.
AND before you all forget that this is a poor attempt to imitate maria, blade and all the other truly shite poets on this site I am giving it a magnificent vote in order to make it rise up off the bottom like dark angel's cock.




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