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OM (Free verse) by SupremeDreamer

What is the mask She wears.. oh widow, She walks and talks Mumbling.. But saying Nothing. Fool, consumed Confused, hazed Forever changing Becoming one with All.. Above it, With balance, No emotion, but all Emotion, in balance. Clear is the mask, Transparency for the Ones who see.. Then the mask Is illusion, And they can see What these calm Skies see. - Om.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 22-Jun-03/4:25 AM
You need to change your attitude. You need to approach criticism with a little more maturity. The site administrator is considering, on my recommendation, introducing an award for maturity on this site. I am one of the leading candidates for this award. Why? Because I take things seriously and don't dismiss constructive criticism under meaningless slogans like "mind you ONE word.."




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