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OM (Free verse) by SupremeDreamer

What is the mask She wears.. oh widow, She walks and talks Mumbling.. But saying Nothing. Fool, consumed Confused, hazed Forever changing Becoming one with All.. Above it, With balance, No emotion, but all Emotion, in balance. Clear is the mask, Transparency for the Ones who see.. Then the mask Is illusion, And they can see What these calm Skies see. - Om.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 22-Jun-03/3:48 AM
We don't mind a bit of humor here at PoemeRanker from time to time. But when it comes to spelling, and more importantly our poetry, we can't afford to "laugh off" our mistakes. I had hoped you would receive my constructive criticism with a little more solemnity.




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