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The Snowglobe (Free verse) by josh_5o

Up and down and all around her hand shakes the snowglobe. Snow that for years layed on the ground is now in midair drifting. Life that has slept within the town inside now makes snowmen with the white flakes. All has fallen, the town rests again never again to be woken except by anothers hand. Up and down and all around her hand shakes his heart. Feelings that none had yet found now overflow, for his heart had been ripped apart. Love that was stored deep inside now unvieled and has nothing to hide. All has receeded, the feelings rest again never again to be woken except by anothers hand.

forestchild7 19-Jul-02/3:18 PM
sad but good...




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