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New school nursery rhymes (Free verse) by DeadtotheWorld

Some one’s in the kitchen with Dina Some ones in the kitchen, gotta go Some one’s in the kitchen with Dina And that someone is a Ho Tickle tickle little star How thy wonders who you are Up above the clouds so high I just wish that you would die Sacrifice all your gases and Hope that your ass collapses Ring around the roses Striking out your poses Ashes to Ashes Just fall to Dust Little Miss Muffet sat on a puppet Eating her birds and brains Along came a spider and shat in her cider Now the little bugger has no legs Jack be nimble Jack might be quick But he just synched his Ball sack with that candle stick One Two buy some shoes Three Four slam my Door Five Six check out chicks Seven Eight stay up late Nine Ten let the fun begin

thepinkbunnyofdoom 15-Jun-03/11:40 AM
Could have been done better, should have ryhmed better in some places (i.e. Jack be nimble, but he just synched his) and You forgot some major ones such as Humpty Dumpty, Litte Mack Horner, and Little Miss Blew Sheep. -1- just because you took my Idea and fucked it up. J/K -7-.




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