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Janine (a set of haikus) (Haiku) by capachijim

Your serenity, The grace that makes me want more, More of what I love. The prettiest one, Everyone meets in their life, That captures them so. My privation, My own inamorata, In whom I confine. Let us become one, So that a zephyr of love, Can finally veil.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 15-Jun-03/9:50 AM
Of course you do, you stupid shit. You have absolutely no understanding of poetry, so you're amazed by anything that looks like it might be meaningful (read: contains words like "zephyr" and is impossible to understand on a casual reading).




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