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One Night Stand (Free verse) by Audaciouslilgrl

The softness of the kiss The intoxication of the touch The incessant heat The soft rhythm of body against body Pleasure and desire united all in one moment, But this is far from an act of love It is only a charade The momentary release A wishful ache That this were something more Than mere lust...

richa 14-Jun-03/10:48 AM
I do feel this a bit
but it is rather ordinary
good try though




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