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Advise (Free verse) by Audaciouslilgrl

In a world filled with hate, There's only so much you can take. You meet people, listen to the comments they make, Then watch, as they make their mistakes. So many people thought they were better then you. When all their friends are gone, whom will they turn to? Your parents are here to teach you, but you never let them reach you. There's a lot they don't know, but they can't let that show. They think if they give you more space, In their footsteps you'll trace. Sometimes that's true, but you've got to learn for you. So my only advice to you: Do what you must do, But watch the world around you. Each day, learn something new. Never be afraid just to be you.

horus8 13-Jun-03/11:44 AM
Unfortunately I'm scared to DEATH to be me, and that, thank god, is how I put that much more Kale into my "apocalyptic" power poetry (Jared Leto taught that to me one night while we were 30 seconds to Uranus)

Now a prayer;

Oh lord, let this curse of brilliance subside so I can walk around in bad lala poetry land with these wretched little fucking computer brats and their ridiculous real life observations that they've obviously garnered from the computer also, and or a close friend, that found early age tragedy. Lord let them read more and quit making my eye balls spontaneously deflate, and my asshole randomly whistle strange alien anthems in the cold dark fistings of the night, Amen.

Ps. Send my the new pringles before anyone else sweet jesu i fucking love pringles.




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