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one starry night (Free verse) by crwncka1

as i looked toward the heavens on this one dark starry night i was in search of a shooting star i was back home on this one night where i was raised just standing out in the countryside in the tall grassy plains hearing the sounds of the night creatures a locus here a cricket there even in the far distance i could hear the yelp of coyotes yes out here the sky is clear especially on this one dark starry night without even a single cloud in the sky on a new moon and then it finally came just before the dawn sun rose i saw a shooting star in the far eastern sky

<{Baba^Yaga}> 12-Jun-03/5:17 PM
Fyi I was raised by lobos, and have no clue as to what you are speaking about, but thanks.




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