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This guy (Free verse) by Jai

Your so cute your so nice your so polite your just to good to be true your taken

Robert K Foster 11-Jun-03/4:05 PM
it should be "you're" a contraction for "you are" not "your" which is a possessive pronoun.
after that, try some more substance, more specific details, images, etc.
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