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He says (Free verse) by Jai

He says he's 17, but he acts 10. So immature and dont know what feelings are or how to express them. He says your the only one for me. But you can tell he's lying, you can see straight threw him. He says "I didn't do it, it wasnt me". Why would some one just make that up? You know it's true. He says he'll be there for you. Yeah when he needs some loving, but where are you when hes upset? He says he loves you. Mabye he does, mabye he doesn't, who knows? mabye you. What would he says if the situation was reversed?

Robert K Foster 11-Jun-03/3:59 PM
I agree. don't forget to soak yourself in chum.




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