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Goddess of the vineyard (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

Vinifera creep reach longingly to entwine her. Knowing exactly when the grapes will be harvested, she will dote on them until they are ready then walk away weeping tears of joy.

scitz 11-Jun-03/3:43 PM
LAst 2 lines of S1 just fuck it up, other than that I really absorbed myself in to this so I ask you from the bottom of my tiny black heart, change it. 7




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