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Death Of Day ( re-edit) (Haiku) by Mr Pig

Dusk came, Sun bled coagulating the clouds. Silver assassin appeared.

Mr Pig (again) 11-Jun-03/3:29 PM
Dear Robert

It was this you composed so majestically that I love.

Waves fold on the beach
Sand clings to the old dead man
Filling his wrinkles

Its timeless.




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