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moment in time (Free verse) by calilegzzz

The cool crips breeze carries the sent of the sea, as it pulls away from the waters edge The full moon escapes the dark clouds, to shimmer atop the water, like tiny diamonds A subtle chill engulfs the night, but a single thought of you lends me the warmth I need I pause, content to absorb the nights majestic beauty. With my pulse raceing from our recent encounter, and the feeling of your flesh still warm within me I surrneder to the breeze as it caresses my naked form, which arouses yet another thought you... I lay, lost in that place somewhere between reality and fantasy As the morning light slowly warms my skin, and the night fades like a distant dream I recall the depths of pleasure we shared, forever etched within my mind And there is where it shall remain.... A rare, and perfect, Moment in Time.... A PERFECT MOMENT.. ....IN TIME

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 11-Jun-03/4:30 AM
I no longer feel inclined to call you a capital fellow.




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