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Death Of Day ( re-edit) (Haiku) by Mr Pig

Dusk came, Sun bled coagulating the clouds. Silver assassin appeared.

Mr Pig (again) 10-Jun-03/12:23 PM
Yes I know I boobed Robert, I can do the 5-7-5 but these thoughts sometimes appear in the middle of the night and you know I write them down because I like them but your right, its not quite the baked Alaska is it?

I am sorry, would you believe one of my Haikus was inspired by you? I can tell which one did if you like.

Your friend


Laurence




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