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The Black Hearted Sunflower (Haiku) by anitawit

The black- hearted sunflower Is kin to the sun Even though it carries about Darkness in its heart

Robert K Foster 10-Jun-03/9:30 AM
great concept, but redundant. you essentially say the same thing twice.




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