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Dear Lord (Sonnet) by simone_girard

Dear lord please hear my prey tonight For my husbands had a terrible fright His dear old mother's taken ill And this is a void I cannot fill She's suffered now for years and years And their has been so many tears But none of these were out of joy And my husband's gone from man to boy If she should die this family becomes half And it'll be a long time before we laugh So please dear lord take away her pain So we can see her smile again For her place can be filled by no other For this place in our hearts is for our dear mother And now in you I place my trust and love In you dear lord in heaven above.

bondjedi 7-Jun-03/5:24 AM
there is one good line in this poem, the opening one, and the only reason it's good is because you are as good a speller as you are a poet.




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