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You Left Me (Free verse) by Cali

I pray to you with all my might, To help me through these lonley nights, All i want is someone to love, Someone to hold, Someone to hug, Someone to teach me right from wrong, Someone to cry on when my faith is gone, Someone to kiss me day after day, Someone who wont ever push me away, Someone with wisdom that they can share, Someone i know will always be there, I know who i want this someone to be, But this special someone was taken from me, Taken by a blade which slit her veins, And now my life wont be the same, How could she leave me a motherless child, My life will never be tender and mild, It will be filled with lonsome nights and empty days, Because she forced that blade to take her away.

Cali 3-Jun-03/5:51 AM
lmao....shutup man ur a wank! i read ur poems and they r not meaningfull at all so shut ur mouth....how do u know i didn't write that as a child? even still in the eyes of some i still am a child...you have no idea about my life whether my mother has passed on or not so fuk up! its people like u who annoy ME thinking you know everything you know shit all! so keep ur nasty opinions to urself.




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