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ILLusion in Falsity (Free verse) by Sugar Victim

She doesn't understand why It seems an endless pattern going from guy to guy They're great,they love her but not too long Then theres some exuse like this is all so wrong Maybe it's her She just has bad luck The guys she loves are always worthless fucks And you'd think there'd be something to keep it in check besides a good lay and a kiss on the neck So she sets herself up for those in a glass case fiddles with the lock and goes for the chase whos to blame? It's really quite clear the one holding her heart and swallowing her fear

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 2-Jun-03/2:56 AM
You claim it's an endless pattern that she goes from guy to guy. But so far she's only been with a finite number of guys. There are infinitely many incompatible infinite patterns compatible with that finite past.

For example, you think her history of sleeping with worthless guys again and again indicates a pattern called 'bedhopping'. However, it equally well indicates a pattern called 'quedhopping', defined as: sleeping with worthless guys up to and including 2nd June 2003, and physically transmuting into a sentient lichen thereafter. Hence, nothing about her past history determines that she's bedhopping rather than quedhopping.

I think you have more important things to worry about concerning your friend. You'd better go and check she's not already started the transmutation.




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